Friday, October 31, 2008

Love After Life; Jessie (composition from a friend)

I PM-ed my friend, Erik, about my new blog (this one) for him to check. The next day he told me he wants to give me something, and it's somehow related to the one I'm writing (LOL I swear I was touched by the thought) He wrote me a composition about my writing. Well.. he's been a good writer from day 1. He's improved a lot, I guess.


Jessie

Reminiscing the moments in the rain
Where she and dad are playing
Her mom in the spandex dress and standing in the door
4:58 PM
Time’s up for daydreaming
Where reality is thorn and scars

[Chorus]
You feel at ease when
Writing with your pen
And paper
That’s what Jessie does
That’s what Jessie does
But showers in heavens
I can remember
I miss you
Daddy, please come back here
Please come back for me

Warm breeze touching in my face
Just like memories of love
Atmospheric summer days like lonely nights to me
Achieving all the things I dream
But I’m lost in open road
I wish today that you were here
That you were here

(Repeat Chorus)
Daddy, please come back here
‘Cause I miss you…
I love you

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Na-touch naman ako!

Hindi ko pa rin masasabi na nag-improve ako when it comes in songwriting kasi may mga peculiar things pa rin yung songs na ginagawa ko.

Pero touched talaga ako! :)

Ano ba tawag diyan?

It's my "Novel Soundtrack"...at pang 50th ko yan so happy din ako!

Anonymous said...

Meron pala akong bagong concept sa songwriting:

Taboo and Sensitive Issues

Yung titles baka after matapos lahat yung kanta...Ok?

~Clyde~